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The Pon Farr Action Response Team (PFART) certification training, the segment on communication and how to approach a Vulcan in pon farr without anyone dying or being more traumatized than necessary.
 
By [archiveofourown.org profile] Reyka_Sivao. Transcript on AO3.

beatrice_otter: Saavik and Spock (Saavik and Spock)
My [community profile] startrekholidays fic is done and posted, and my [community profile] yuletide fic is at the "bus pass" stage--it's not as polished as I would like it, but if I got hit by a bus tomorrow, it would count as fulfilling the assignment. I also have a treat that I'm working on, which is going well, but I'm sort of concerned about how long it's going to be. I hope it will not turn out to be like From Castle To Palace, a 17k-long treat I wrote in 2016. There are other treats I would like to write!

Speaking of long fic, I am going to do the "digress like Hugo!" festival that [personal profile] petra is going to be hosting next year. You know all those 19th Century novelists like Victor Hugo and Charles Dickens and Herman Melville, where they'd have these long digressions (whole chapters sometimes!) about stuff that was only vaguely related to the story? Like, in Les Mis, you get literally 70 pages in before you even meet Jean Valjean, the main character. There's chapters about everything from the Battle of Waterloo to French religious life, where the action stops completely while the author lectures you about whatever. Melville was the same (wales are fish!). Dickens didn't have whole chapters that were digressions, but he had lots of shorter digressions within chapters.

Some of us have a natural inclination to write like that. For me, worldbuilding is my jam, and I regularly have bits of worldbuilding I come up with that ... I can't actually fit into the story itself. It very much informs how I'm writing the plot and characters, but the reader doesn't need to know it and it would stop the story to go into all that detail. So to have a fic fest where we are encouraged to put in all that stuff, is just going to be so much fun.

I'm going to write Star Trek. My main self-insert OC, back when I was a young otter, was a Vulcan priestess who was also Spock's daughter and married to a human starship captain. Besides the adventures I had them go on (most of which I can't recall, none of which I ever wrote down) I filled notebooks with lore. (backstory! family history and geneology! timelines! etc!) And I still today, when I'm daydreaming, will have T'Amanda and her husband the Captain show up in various Star Trek shows. (They go to DS9! They have a wacky wormhole accident and end up in the Delta Quadrant with Voyager! They have a wacky time travel accident and end up on Captain Archer's Enterprise! They have a wacky time travel accident and end up in the Reboot universe! ... etc.)

I am going to be completely self-indulgent and use them as the base story to do Vulcan worldbuilding digressions around. Marriage customs! The history of various inter-clan disputes! The history of Vulcan/Human romantic relationships (and sexual harassment)! Saavik's history and how it impacts her relationship to Vulcan culture! Religion on Vulcan and what high priestesses do when they're not performing the fal-tor-pan! What aromanticism and amatonormativity look like in the 24th Century!

The challenge is going to be, "can I figure out enough plot to hang the digressions on?" and we shall have to see about that. I'm definitely going to go the Victor Hugo route of "we're not even going to MEET the main character until we get a whole long section of stuff about this other character who is pretty minor in the grand scheme of the story." It's not going to be seventy pages long (I hope), but it'll be there.
beatrice_otter: Uhura and Uhura Prime (Too awesome for one timeline)
Title: House-building
Fandom: Star Trek AOS
Characters: Original Female Characters,
Author: beatrice_otter
Rating: kid
Length:
Summary: When choosing a spouse, there are many things to consider.

AN:The idea of chi`pain was taken from Macedon's excellent DS9 series Jeu-Parti.

Sequel to: The Desert Between
Nyota's Choice

At AO3 and tumblr


Read more... )

Next Fic: Children of the Desert
beatrice_otter: Zachary Quinto's Spock (Spock)
Title: Children of the Desert
Fandom: Star Trek AOS
Characters: Original Female Characters,
Author: [personal profile] beatrice_otter 
Rating: kid
Length: 8,203 words
Betaed by: [personal profile] laurajv 
Sequel to: The Desert Between
Summary: There are many hybrid children on the new Vulcan homeworld, including Spock and Nyota's children. Things don't always go smoothly.

AN: Vulcan words are taken/adapted from the Vulcan Language Dictionary. “mekh” means parent, I adapted it to mean “stepmother.”
“Jata” is a girl’s name in Kikuyu, it means “Star”

Sequel to: The Desert Between
Nyota's Choice
House-building


At AO3 or Tumblr



“But that’s the way Grandma taught me to sing!” )
beatrice_otter: Zachary Quinto's Spock (Spock)
Let'thieri (25745 words) by [personal profile] sixbeforelunch 
Fandom: Star Trek, Star Trek: Deep Space Nine
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: OMC/OFC
Characters: Original Vulcan Character(s)
Additional Tags: Dominion War, Vulcan, Vulcan Culture, Nightmares, Trauma, Mental Illness, Ordinary People, Family, Telepathic Bonds, Parents and Children, War, no canon characters, Chronic Pain, Disability, Burn injuries, aftermath of war, Insomnia, Suicidal Ideation, Mourning, Healing
Series: Part 2 of T'naehm
Summary:

The war is over, but peace does not come easy.

I love this fic--I betaed it, and I'm so excited it's ready!
beatrice_otter: Saavik and Spock (Saavik and Spock)
Kal'i'farr heh T'naehm (11199 words) by sixbeforelunch
Fandom: Star Trek, Star Trek: Deep Space Nine
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Original Female Character/Original Male Character
Characters: Original Vulcan Character(s)
Additional Tags: Vulcan, Vulcan Culture, Alien Culture, Pon Farr, Marriage, The Dominion War - Freeform, world building, action takes place over a single day, tight focus, tight 3rd person POV, Ordinary People, Little Brothers, Big Sisters, architecture nerds, linguistics nerds, Sherlock Holmes fans, Clans, alien ceremonies, Arranged Marriage, Alien Food, Food, Cooking, Telepathy, Mental bonds, Telepathic Bonds, Parents and Children, Communication, no canon characters
Summary:

A meditation on marriage and war, from a Vulcan perspective, on the eve of the Dominion War.
 

Lovely fic! I am fascinated by this picture of Vulcan culture, OCs Veral and T'Lin are interesting, and I really hope [personal profile] sixbeforelunch  has a sequel planned because I would love to read more of their adventures!
beatrice_otter: Saavik and Spock (Saavik and Spock)
So, I have a question about Vulcan biology.

I have long been puzzled by the inherent illogic of a heat that can kill you.  Heats are supposed to grow the species, not reduce it.

But the thing is, terrestrial animals that have a heat, usually it's one heat cycle per year or so.  Because that gives you time for the babies to be born and grow a little bit before winter sets in and obviously you don't want to be pregnant during winter scarcity, and then by the time a year has gone by the babies are old enough/mature enough that they don't need Mama and another heat cycle begins in the spring.

Vulcan heats are seven years apart.

My first thought, as I began contemplating this, was ... how long are Vulcan pregnancies?!?  Because Vulcan children seem to grow at about the same rate as Human children (7 year old Spock in the animated series episode Yesteryear looked and acted about like one would expect a 7 year old to, and there was never any hint that he was developmentally advanced or delayed for a Vulcan), and so if you think time between heats=pregnancy+time for baby to no longer be an infant, well, you start to wonder if Vulcan pregnancies are like three years long or something.

But then I realized that I was overlooking part of the nature of a terrestrial heat cycle.  Part of it is also to time things such that no one is pregnant during winter, the time when resources are scarcest.

Which leads me to wonder: does the planet have a year that is seven Earth-years long?  It seems like that would be pretty far from Vulcan's sun--Mars has a year that's two of our years long, Jupiter's years are 12 years long, would a planet even be habitable in that range?  (And if this is the case, does that mean that all Vulcans go into Pon Farr at about the same time every seven years?  Eeep!  Talk about a disruption to the society!  Of course, if this is the case, how do they keep it secret?  Just kick every non-Vulcan offplanet for six months every seven years?)

Is there some other reason for a seven year cycle that I'm not thinking about?

But this brings me back to the first question, that’s bugged me for years. And perhaps provides an answer. If resources are (or were, when the species was evolving) so scarce that they can only afford to have a kid once every seven years, maybe it is designed to clear out deadwood. Maybe part of the reason for such a deadly heat is to reduce competition for resources which the species can’t afford to waste on non-reproducing members.

I wish fic spent less time on teh sex and more time on the biological, social, and cultural aspects of it.
beatrice_otter: Saavik and Spock (Saavik and Spock)
[personal profile] sixbeforelunch asks: What Star Trek headcanon of yours has not yet made it into a story?

Most of it is (unsurprisingly!) about Vulcans.  For example, I have some Thoughts about how to reconcile Vulcan culture from Enterprise with the rest of the TV show.  As mentioned in my previous post, the taboo against telepathy there DOES NOT FIT with anything else we know about Vulcan telepathy ANYWHERE ELSE IN ANY OF THE SHOWS, let alone the books.  I would bet you that lots and lots of families (plus of course the monks of Gol and the priestesses of Mount Seleya) just kept quietly keeping on with what they were doing and finding ways to mislead the Science Directorate about it.

I also think that Mestral from that one episode about the Vulcans marooned in West Virginia in the 1960s got married and had kids  who formed a whole backwoods West-Virginia clan of Vulcan-Human hybrids who kept some elements of Vulcan culture and not others, and quietly imported some Vulcan things (possibly musical instruments, crops, etc.) after official First Contact was made.  And possibly also made contact with the V'tosh ka'tur at some point--maybe a few marriages?  Adopting kids the V'tosh ka'tur didn't want to raise on ships but didn't want to send back to Vulcan to be forced into line?  And possibly after Vulcan was destroyed in the Reboot universe sending aid there to help out.  (I am completely ignoring the canonical difficulties in producing a Vulcan-Human hybrid, here, and the fact that if anything the show underestimated it.)

I think that Saavik and Spock (who eventually got married, in the books) have a daughter who is on track to being the next T'Pau, and will in time become the Eldest Mother of their clan.  I think her name is Amanda.

I think that part of the reason that Perrin (Sarek's second wife) and Spock didn't get along is that Perrin didn't know how to relate to a step-son older than she was, and also (unlike Amanda) was very definitely On Sarek's Side in any disagreements, instead of staying out of them or trying to be a go-between.  And I think on Spock's part he was (however illogically) interested in finding fault with the woman who replaced his mother, and he'd have been a lot less tweaked off if his father had married a Vulcan instead, something logically arranged by the clan.  Because falling in love with a human once is one thing, and shows how wonderfully special Amanda was.  Falling twice just smacks of fetishism, and makes Amanda one in a series.  Meanwhile, Sarek loved Amanda, and he loves Perrin, but in very different ways.  He had to make accommodations for Amanda, and he changed his lifestyle for her (however much they looked like a Perfect Vulcan Couple on the outside), and marrying a Vulcan woman would mean adapting back to Vulcan ways of doing things, and he's old and doesn't want to.  Perrin, however, will maintain the human tone of the household, and she's kind of in awe of her predecessor so things can stay pretty much the same.  (She is not, however, in awe of Sarek, however much she respects him.  Spock thinks she is, and respects his father less because of it, but then he doesn't see the way Sarek and Perrin are when they are alone together.  Perrin, for her part, plays up the Dutiful Vulcan Wife around Spock because she knows it annoys him, which doesn't help his impression of her.)  She knows where she stands in Sarek's affections; she wants respect more than anything else, and he gives it to her, and she's one of those people who falls in love with a culture other than her own and wants a place in it, and he gives her that.  And Sarek doesn't like the friction between Spock and Perrin, but look, he and Spock have always had their differences, and both are stubborn, and neither have ever had to deal with one another without Amanda there to smooth off the rough edges and tell them they're being idiots and cajole them into talking, and he doesn't know how to do it with Perrin fuming about Spock's disrespect.  It's the one thing he regrets about marrying her.

Worf spent a few years as a teen trying to fit in and be more human, but eventually realized that it wouldn't get him any more acceptance from the other kids at school, and so went the opposite direction and tried to be More Klingon Than Klingons.  He doesn't really remember that phase, until Alexander comes along, and even then, he's forgotten a lot more about what he was going through than he thinks he has.

Will Riker gets a lot of crap for staying a Commander for so long.  He should have gotten a promotion to Captain years before he did.  He stayed because he loves Enterprise, and as First Officer he still gets to do the stuff he loves (front lines of exploration, getting to actually GO ON HAZARDOUS AWAY TEAMS and not stay on the bridge all the time).  And it's comfortable there, with all his friends.

I don't have any headcanon for DS9 that I haven't written because the show was so fascinating and well-written I never felt I had to fill in the gaps myself.  And I didn't pay enough attention to Voyager.  Didn't pay much attention to Enterprise, either, truth to tell, but the gaps were SO FRICKING HUGE.

There are still five days open on the January Meme.

beatrice_otter: Saavik and Spock (Saavik and Spock)
For [personal profile] laurajv: What are the most interesting ideas about Vulcans you've seen in other people's fanfic?

Hrm.  Now, this is a tough one.  If you count the 80s Star Trek novels as published fanfic (they really are, particularly when you consider how many of those authors were fanfic authors who sold their fic to Pocket Books), well, I don't know if it gets easier, but it does get easier to pinpoint specific things and attribute them to specific authors.

See, the thing is, I have VERY SPECIFIC IDEAS about Vulcan culture, mostly derived from those 80s Trek novels.  I did some meta about it a few years, back, after the first AOS movie, and you can find it here.  My first criteria for Vulcan fics is "how well does it match up with my headcanon" and if it doesn't, then it doesn't really matter how interesting it is, it's not going to grab me.  (This is one of many reasons why Enterprise was problematic for me.)  And when I do read a fic and go "wow, awesome Vulcans!" it's usually because the author shares many of the same fanons gleaned from the Trek novels of the 80s (especially Spock's World, The Romulan Way, The Vulcan Academy Murders, Dwellers in the Crucible, etc.)  So right now, it's hard for me to list any specific interesting fanon from fic, because it gets mixed up with what was in those books to form a whole Vulcan worldview.

I mean, your fics always have awesome Vulcan worldbuilding, and I like [archiveofourown.org profile] macedon's Vulcan fics so much (Wisdom and Beauty, the Anselm series)  ... Oh! [livejournal.com profile] xparrot had a really great take on Vulcan grieving practices in Markings.  Also, [personal profile] ljc has a great meta about the Vulcan trickster T'Kay here.

beatrice_otter: Uhura and Uhura Prime (Too awesome for one timeline)
Title: The Desert Between
Author: [personal profile] beatrice_otter 
Fandom: Star Trek
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Nyota Uhura, Spock
Word Count: 14,224
Betaed by: [personal profile] laurajv 
Summary: “All Vulcans are constrained. By our biology, by our clans, by our whole society. But women more so than men, and offworlder women married to Vulcan men most of all.” Nyota loves Spock. But she can’t have him without taking Vulcan culture, too.
Note: the title is an adaption of The River Between by Ngugi Wa Thiong’o. [personal profile] laurajv wants me to write a sequel; I may, but it probably won’t be any time soon.

At AO3



The most important thing for the Vulcans right now is the rebuilding of their culture and society, not the building of the new colony’s buildings. They named their new homeworld ‘rebirth,’ and that’s exactly what they want to happen. )

Nyota's Choice
House-building
Children of the Desert
beatrice_otter: Star Trek symbol--red background (Red Shirt)
So, I have done my good deed for the week.  For those of you who have never heard of him, Macedon was arguably the greatest Star Trek fanfic writer of the 1990s, before he gafiated.  He was one of the big names on alt.startek.creative, not only as a writer but also as a moderator and mentor.  His writing is some of the best stuff you'll find, but alas, his website was on a free hosted AOL site that went down a couple of years ago.  Someone rescued it--yay! ... but they uploaded it onto geocities.  (Oops.)  His stuff was still available if you knew where to find it on trekiverse.org (which is ancient, creaky, and cumbersome).  In the hopes of preserving his fic in useful function for posterity, I have uploaded it all to AO3.

Macedon came to my attention because he writes great Vulcans.  In particular, Wisdom and Beauty.  If you have any interest in Vulcans at all, you absolutely must read this story.  It is a story of a Vulcan/Human bonding in the 24th century and the details and richness of the story. Vulcan comes alive. The society, the planet, the people. They are irrevocably threaded through this story in a masterful way.  No canon characters appear, but the whole story is so incredibly well done that it doesn't matter.  (Warning, there is a graphic description of a rape, and the psychological after-effects.)

Then I read his Jeu-Parti series.  Macedon's greatest gift is the ability to take an idea, a theme, a moral (or a set of them, for his longer works) and make them come to life in the lives and thoughts of his characters. He explores issues realistically, without ever becoming preachy or moralistic or filled with platitudes, and he does it because everything (plot, theme, world-building, etc.) flows naturally from the lives of his characters. He makes every character he writes (original or not) be realistic, three-dimensional, and fascinating.  Jeu-Parti is the three-part story of Jake Sisko, the son of Commander Benjamin Sisko, and his relationship with a Vulcan named Salene. But it's also about more than that. It's about choosing to be different, about choosing to pursue your dreams at the expense of normality, about dealing with society's disapproval, about friendship, about love, about family, about mental illness, about the difficulty of building a relationship--friendship or other--across cultural lines.  If you don't like slash, you can read the first story without any qualms; each story stands on its own, and the first one is pure friendship. But I would still encourage you to try the other two stories. They're definitely worth reading.

And, you know, Voyager is my least favorite Star Trek series, but I loved his other work, and so I decided to try the eight part "braided novel" he wrote with Peg Robinson, Talking Stick/Circle.  And was in awe.  The story is too sprawling (in the grand sense) in scale and reach to reduce to a mere synopsis; let us just say that this is Voyager unfettered and red in tooth and claw, such as Paramount with its nice tidy pander-to-the-demographics mentality could only dream of producing.  This is what the show could have been if they had allowed the characters to be real, flawed, but still courageous people. This is what the show could have been if they had allowed it to actually deal seriously with issues instead of platitudes. The writing is awesome, the characters and plot will grip you, and if it doesn't make you think, you have no brain. There are not words to describe the awesomeness of this series. When I read it, I stayed up all night to read the whole thing despite having to work in the morning because it was just that incredible.

Among the many issues that the TV series ignored or glossed over that this series does not:
1) the fact that Chakotay is an Indian from a tribe that has somehow managed to keep its identity as a tribe despite the fact that the Federation has screwed it over almost as much as the US did back in the white settlement of the West.
2) the fact that Janeway and most of the Starfleet officers, enlightened and culturally sensitive as they may be, still carry the backpack of privilege, still look at the world through that lens.
3) the fact that the Maquis are not Starfleet, and have their own identity and pride, and that is very different from Starfleet identity and pride.
4) the fact that religion isn't just a nice bit of local color for the Indian character, but a true and deep faith.

I cannot rec Macedon's fic highly enough.  Go and read.  You won't regret it.
beatrice_otter: Zachary Quinto's Spock (Spock)
[community profile] vulcanreforged is hosting a kink meme--gen, het, slash, all welcome, as long as it's about Vulcans in the aftermath of the new movie.  There are some great prompts up, and room for lots more!  (I particularly am interested in the Vulcans as Space Pirates one on the cracky end, and the Andorian cook finding something that tastes like plomeek and making a killing on the less cracky end.)  All are welcome.  If you don't have a DW, you can participate using your livejournal OpenID.
beatrice_otter: Me in red--face not shown (Default)
I'm a student, right?  With a month till the end of the school year.  In that month, besides all the homework and final projects, I have four fics I am currently working on:

A post-Paladin of Souls Iselle and Ista fic for[livejournal.com profile] femgenficathon 
A Sarek/Amanda fic for [livejournal.com profile] trekreversebang 
A Spock/Uhura reboot post-movie fic currently being betaed by the lovely [personal profile] laurajv.
A Remix fic (for which I have yet to select a story).

That's a good number.  Enough that I'm regularly working on something, not so much I can't keep track or get the ones with deadlines done before the deadlines.

Anyway, the S/U fic is all about them discussing "where we go from here" now that Vulcan is gone and T'Pring is dead and Spock explaining all about Vulcan culture and the possibilities for their relationship within Vulcan culture and Uhura Not Happy about all the stuff he's springing on her and his lack of flexibility on what it would mean for her and possible ways of blending their two cultures rather than her just going native like his mother did.  Basically, it's my excuse to explore Vulcan culture and gender roles in fic, the fic which grew out of my meta on Vulcan culture and how it affects Worldbuilding in the New Reality.  And one of the options Spock mentions is him marrying a nice Vulcan girl who stays home and takes care of the children (hers and Nyota's) and the home, while he and Uhura stay in Starfleet and have adventures together, and come home to visit on leave.  And [personal profile] laurajv mentioned that now she really wants to read a fic about the nice Vulcan girl who's staying on the new Vulcan homeworld raising the kids, including some who are only 1/4 Vulcan.  I was like, "dude, whatever, I ain't got time to write it and the reason for stopping the fic where I do is that I genuinely have no clue what Uhura's going to decide, or if she'll figure out some kind of workable compromise."  And now, while I still don't know what the hypothetical wife's name would be, I know her backstory and who her best friend is and ... and I don't need another fic right now!  I don't have time for it!  And this is not something I could hand over to [community profile] bunny_support or [community profile] prospectus because it's so tied up in my views on Vulcan culture and the backstory that has created itself and (unlike most plot bunnies I have) it would give me hives to try and read someone else's take on it.
beatrice_otter: Star Trek symbol--red background (Red Shirt)
My absolute main kink, whether fanfic or profic or movies or tv shows, is for solid worldbuilding.  I want to know about culture, government, history, religion, ethnology, psychology--all the soft-science background details.  So, for instance, for the new Star Trek timeline/AR, I have all kinds of ideas about how I think the surviving Vulcans will react.  My impressions of Vulcan culture are taken from all the tv shows and movies, combined with the classic Star Trek books from the 80's/90's (e.g. Spock's World, the Vulcan Academy Murders, Sarek, the Pandora Principle, Dwellers in the Crucible, Strangers from the Sky, etc.  Note that Kurtzman and Orci consider Spock's World to be canon, and I cannot recommend it highly enough.  Here is a summary of Vulcan history interludes from that book.)

So, here's Vulcan culture as I have interpreted it. )

How will this affect the rebuilding of Vulcan culture? )

So, if I were Spock Prime, going off to help rebuild Vulcan society, here's what I would suggest. )

ETA: I've written a Spock/Uhura story that grew out of this meta: The Desert Between.

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