Comment on "Summer Experience" via the Pit of Voles:
Nice try but there are some questions you should answer.Gee, thanks, reviewer. Never mind that that's not the story I was telling. Or that, in any story/vignette that small, there will be far more questions raised than answered. That's the point. That's why I love reading and writing them: they raise questions and make you think and leave you a lot of space to fill in your own ideas.
First of all:
Who is Dr. Baums Wife ?
You leave more Questions than "Born to run"