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Characters: Bill Adama (knowledge of the new Caprica series a plus)
Specifics: this shouldn't need much in the way of spelling/grammar help, but it needs an outside view to make sure that it hangs together and makes sense and the theme and tone work. It's mostly a character study of Adama and his views on/interactions with Cylons, and it's set in late season 4. It's just under 3k words, and I'm not sure that it works as a coherent whole. It may need things added to it or taken out or re-written, and I'm too close to it to be able to see where the problems are.
Specifics: this shouldn't need much in the way of spelling/grammar help, but it needs an outside view to make sure that it hangs together and makes sense and the theme and tone work. It's mostly a character study of Adama and his views on/interactions with Cylons, and it's set in late season 4. It's just under 3k words, and I'm not sure that it works as a coherent whole. It may need things added to it or taken out or re-written, and I'm too close to it to be able to see where the problems are.
