Otter's Rock

Um, I'll look it over for you, sure, but I have done exactly nothing with weddings so far besides being a bridesmaid once. BTW, in case you didn't know the standard classic phrasings of most American weddings are drawn from the marriage service in the Book of Common Prayer, albeit usually at a couple removes. It might be a place to start. Note that the English still officially use the 17th-Century version produced for Queen Elizabeth, while the Episcopalians in the US have revised it several times, most recently in 1979 iirc.