I am in DESPERATE need of a plot-theme beta for a Stargate fic

• It's like 11k words (now, but it's not finished),
• it's Teal'c-and-Daniel focused stranded-fic,
• it has two possible endings and I'm not sure which to go by,
• the thematic/stylistic stuff I'm trying to put in to get it to match the tone of the artwork is NOT WORKING,
• it's due on the 30th (though it won't be revealed until a week later so if I can bang out a finished draft, post it on the 30th, I should have time to actually whip it into shape by the time it's revealed.)

HALP PLEASE