Fic Rec: None But Ourselves (the Redemption Song Remix) by cofax

I just realized that I didn't post a link to the story that got written for me in the gateverse_remix, which is a huge oversight because it's a great story. And it's a remix of my single favorite story of mine, to boot.

None But Ourselves (the Redemption Song remix) (PG, gen)
Author: cofax7
Original Author: beatrice_otter
Original Story: Pale Battalions
Summary: It is unclear to this writer how such a fierce and deadly battle, and one so clearly successful, could have had aught to do with the great Jaffa Rebellion more than thirty years later. 2,800 words.

Go, read now! And review.

Anybody here know a good beta who's familiar with Battlestar Galactica?

Because I've had a BSG story (spoilers through Crossroads II) on the back-burner for a couple of months, and it looks like it might get finished this weekend, and I'd hate to post it without a beta. But it's got to be someone familiar with BSG, who's seen the season-ending two part ep Crossroads, because I need to know if I've achieved the proper effect--are the subtle references to what happens then too subtle, too obvious, or just right?