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beatrice_otter) wrote2016-01-18 08:54 pm
beatrice_otter) wrote2016-01-18 08:54 pm
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Looking for help with a Criminal Minds/SG-1 casefic
So I have a Criminal Minds/SG-1 fic I'm writing, and there's a case, and I need the Criminal Minds characters read into (at least a tiny bit of) the Stargate Program because Plot.
Why, that is easy! you say. Have the SGC need the BAU to do a profile! Except that, in the story as written, all the SGC needs is the case file. Once they have that, they can look through properties belonging to corporations and people suspected of Trust ties until they find the right one. And, in canon, they just call up to their friends in the White House and the FBI/Police/ATF/Whoever has to bend and spread 'em. I need something more involved where, to find the Trust base, they need BAU help.
I would love someone to read what I've got and suggest ideas, or even just bounce ideas here on DW.
Casefic stuff as written in the current draft: the police figures out there's something weird going on in some deaths of junkies, and asks for a BAU consult. BAU figures there's something weird going on but can't figure out what it means. (The Trust is kidnapping homeless women, getting them clean, and implanting them with fertilized eggs with the Ancient gene, so they can experiment on them later and breed for stronger genes. When the surrogates prove troublesome, they stage an overdose on the street.) The SGC, independently, has figured out the Trust is Up To Something, and is sending out feelers, and caught wind of this and thinks it's connected. They get the information from the BAU, then check places in the area where corporations with Trust connections have "empty" buildings, find the one that's not empty, and raid it. I need the BAU to be in on the raid and aware of the genetic experimenting/forced surrogacy. But I can't come up with a complication that works and would realistically need BAU help enough that the SGC would be willing to brief them in on even a little piece of the story.
Why, that is easy! you say. Have the SGC need the BAU to do a profile! Except that, in the story as written, all the SGC needs is the case file. Once they have that, they can look through properties belonging to corporations and people suspected of Trust ties until they find the right one. And, in canon, they just call up to their friends in the White House and the FBI/Police/ATF/Whoever has to bend and spread 'em. I need something more involved where, to find the Trust base, they need BAU help.
I would love someone to read what I've got and suggest ideas, or even just bounce ideas here on DW.
Casefic stuff as written in the current draft: the police figures out there's something weird going on in some deaths of junkies, and asks for a BAU consult. BAU figures there's something weird going on but can't figure out what it means. (The Trust is kidnapping homeless women, getting them clean, and implanting them with fertilized eggs with the Ancient gene, so they can experiment on them later and breed for stronger genes. When the surrogates prove troublesome, they stage an overdose on the street.) The SGC, independently, has figured out the Trust is Up To Something, and is sending out feelers, and caught wind of this and thinks it's connected. They get the information from the BAU, then check places in the area where corporations with Trust connections have "empty" buildings, find the one that's not empty, and raid it. I need the BAU to be in on the raid and aware of the genetic experimenting/forced surrogacy. But I can't come up with a complication that works and would realistically need BAU help enough that the SGC would be willing to brief them in on even a little piece of the story.