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Fig Newton ([personal profile] fignewton) wrote in [personal profile] beatrice_otter 2009-05-03 01:00 pm (UTC)

(my first reply got eaten - hope this one goes through)

Loved all of this - the puzzle, the camaraderie, Teal'c's tracking skills meshing with Daniel's archeological knowledge, the kids, all of it!

I am particularly amused at Teal'c thinking of Jack as "the younger man," because I am always vaguely irritated when fanfic writers use that term for Jack and Daniel - but for Teal'c? Perfect. :D

Lovely, lovely fic!

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