I am so sorry to be so fail and late, but boy am I glad I finally had time for reading fic. This is incredibly lovely.
I loved how you had the Masters switching off--it makes sense the Jedi would constantly shuffle Creche Masters in order to eliminate attachment. And even the pajamas, omg. Little details are so important. And baby!Obi-Wan is adorable, with his toddler logic, and with his intelligence already sparkling through.
And baby!Anakin breaks my heart. I loved how you showed his unconscious ability to use a Jedi mind trick. And Shmi saving him Deerick and being hurt so badly in recompense, so sad. The comparison of Obi-Wan's strange (to our Earth-based eyes) if happy and secure childhood to Anakin's dangerous and painful one really drives home the main difference between both men as they grow older.
I really appreciate this! Thank you so much! ♥ I hope you had a Merry and Joyous Christmas. :D
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Date: 2007-12-26 06:56 am (UTC)I loved how you had the Masters switching off--it makes sense the Jedi would constantly shuffle Creche Masters in order to eliminate attachment. And even the pajamas, omg. Little details are so important. And baby!Obi-Wan is adorable, with his toddler logic, and with his intelligence already sparkling through.
And baby!Anakin breaks my heart. I loved how you showed his unconscious ability to use a Jedi mind trick. And Shmi saving him Deerick and being hurt so badly in recompense, so sad. The comparison of Obi-Wan's strange (to our Earth-based eyes) if happy and secure childhood to Anakin's dangerous and painful one really drives home the main difference between both men as they grow older.
I really appreciate this! Thank you so much! ♥ I hope you had a Merry and Joyous Christmas. :D